look at this pic! what is wrong with you people??
The line quality is insane! The detail is absolutely amazing! gosh I could gush about this thing for hours the action is over the top
it's obvious you were going for a crazy climactic battle scene, link beating his way out of an entire army of those fricking deet deets that show up in wind waker... but the things featured here are probably not the same thing... just same concept. against all odds Link is kicking ass and there's zelda all limp and dazed ;; many awesome things happening in the scene. Only trouble I can see here is that there isn't enough chaotic lines blasting acrost the scene, the sword motion blur is ... how to say... it has too much weight put on it, the picture is being carried by that one zipping line, granted there are lots of lines coming in from behind with the arrows (a great solution to the blank space back there mind you) but it's just not enough, maybe if there were some blurs on the 'deet deet' weapons or something? or more horizontal lines crashing in the backround or maybe tilt the horizon a little even to give it a sense of dramatic action..... wow ^^:;; babbling going on in this post sorry for the paragraph but you did ask for advanced cirtique.
wait for me to show him U'r art!.... WOW!.. I'm sure this link's gonna like him VERY MUCH!!.. : D
(he's always complaining about the lack of attitude in link's fanarts..)
but this one.. HEHE!.... will do!... : D
It's really excellent, and I love how you've blurred the sword. However, if the sword is blurred, so should be the figure's head in the very front. I know the sword is blurred from movement, but so would the head from trying to dodge it. Just a sugestion.
Are you allowed to say what magazine this is for? I'd love to see the finished version in print! I hope they won't have to chop out too much cuz of text, it'd be a shame to loose the effect of impending danger of the arrows to the magtitle
another of my favorites games. I always like seeing other people's takes on games that I really like. I created a new Link on one of my DA accounts that I really liked. I never put him in a battle scene like this but I might later on when I have time. What magazine was this for?